Hello peeps,
I've just went to meet Ms Liew today to ask her about her comments on our report. We sent her softcopy and she actually printed all out to paste notes and comments on the report. There are quite a number of stuff to change and edit in Chapter 1 and 2, but chapter 3 is alright. We need to do a more detailed environmental scanning of the canteen food. She also wants to know who is in charge of the maintenance of the treadmills. Other changes to be made to report include:
- a more detailed elaboration on 'own it, share it, learn it'
- linking theories to application to our case
- making recommendations on dates
-explanation on the sequence of ice-breaking, learning and education
Etc...etc...etc...too lazy to pen down everything...there are many nitty gritty details we will need to look into and edit. I will bring the report tml to share it with the writing team..... Jia you!
Cheers,
MeiHui (Chen)
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